Streets

Lined like rivers, they’re walking 
alone forever with eyes on their backs
;
but the thing about eyes is that they
never see themselves.

By the lake a man in red is bathing in
golden fire. His nails dig into the
Sand, and behind him is a house of
thieves who have been robbed of their
thievery; two men and women bind
their souls and ask if he is dying.
On the river, they walk past each other
knowing nothing.

Lined like snakes who have been strangled to obey,
they’re walking alone.
Lined like tongues cut off,
they talk no more.

6 responses to “Streets”

  1. wow what a powerful poem! So many captivating lines!! What inspired you to write this piece?

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    1. A few weeks back, I was at a graduation ceremony (not mine) by the lake. There was this old man wearing a red sweater on the sand, and the more I looked at him, the more I was worried he was dead.

      It was a strange feeling speculating death in the middle of a graduation ceremony, which was happening right behind me (the graduates being the thieves robbed). I’m from the city, where there are more lights than eyes, and I was used to seeing people suffering but not caring or being forced to keep walking as a form of complying with the city’s social norms.

      The poem is basically just me contemplating why I cared about this supposedly dead man, now of all times. I am not someone who has seen death, unlike others who have lived in it and sometimes through it, but in that moment he had seemed so unarguably dead. It was a strange moment in my life.

      Thank you for your interest 🙂 I’m glad you found my words compelling! Your poems are gorgeous as well, keep writing!!

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      1. Wow! I love that explanation! It is so special to know the story and inspiration behind some poems. You have a beautiful mind! Did you find out if the man was actually dead? Did that moment specifically lead to anything else aside from this poem?

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      2. Thank you for your kind words 🙂 Your support and interest is really appreciated!

        I’ll let you decide if the man was actually dead or not, I don’t want to ruin all the mystery of the poem 😉 The reason for the poem is because I felt like this moment should’ve led to a lot more. So, in response to your question, no; nothing else happened other than what was necessary. It was a really strange ordeal.

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      3. Okay MYSTERIOUS Zhang! But I guess the beauty of a poem is not knowing its true meaning, huh?

        I look forward to reading more of your work!

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  2. Very impressive, “Lined like rivers, they’re walking
    alone forever with eyes on their backs
    ;
    but the thing about eyes is that they
    never see themselves”

    There is so much between lines, love it

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